🍹Early to RISA 🧉@sh.itjust.worksM to Greentext@sh.itjust.works · 1 year agoAnon tries to keep his hands busysh.itjust.worksimagemessage-square48fedilinkarrow-up1416arrow-down136
arrow-up1380arrow-down1imageAnon tries to keep his hands busysh.itjust.works🍹Early to RISA 🧉@sh.itjust.worksM to Greentext@sh.itjust.works · 1 year agomessage-square48fedilink
minus-squarefrightful_hobgoblin@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up66arrow-down4·1 year agoStory didn’t go anywhere
minus-squarefibojoly@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up96·1 year agoWell yeah, it’s a slice of life, not the Hero’s Journey.
minus-squareBob@feddit.nllinkfedilinkarrow-up65arrow-down2·1 year agoThis motherfucker when their wife tells them about their day: there was no beginning, middle, or end; the climax wasn’t revealed in chronological order; the hero is clearly a Mary-Sue…
minus-squaremanuallybreathing@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up5arrow-down1·1 year agoIts totally the heros journey, libertarian fanfic, long john silvers AU
minus-squareKusimulkku@lemm.eelinkfedilinkarrow-up1·1 year agoCould’ve made it more interesting though
minus-squareLemmyKnowsBest@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2·1 year agoYeah could’ve added some fiction at the end like a cute girl walks in and they live happily ever after.
minus-squareKusimulkku@lemm.eelinkfedilinkarrow-up2·1 year agoIdk about adding, I would’ve just changed what is already there to be more interesting
minus-squareInstigate@aussie.zonelinkfedilinkarrow-up38arrow-down2·1 year agoOne of the more believable greentexts I’ve read, and likely for this reason.
minus-squarefestnt@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up21arrow-down2·1 year agoyeah, stories dont walk, duh
Story didn’t go anywhere
Well yeah, it’s a slice of life, not the Hero’s Journey.
This motherfucker when their wife tells them about their day: there was no beginning, middle, or end; the climax wasn’t revealed in chronological order; the hero is clearly a Mary-Sue…
Its totally the heros journey, libertarian fanfic, long john silvers AU
Long John silvers gold?
Could’ve made it more interesting though
Yeah could’ve added some fiction at the end like a cute girl walks in and they live happily ever after.
Idk about adding, I would’ve just changed what is already there to be more interesting
One of the more believable greentexts I’ve read, and likely for this reason.
yeah, stories dont walk, duh